More and more people are relying on the private car at their major meant of transportation. Describe some of the problems over-reliance on cars can cause, and suggest at least one possible solution.
Nowadays, there is a dramatic increase of in private car needs in modern cities. Although this could result in many issues, measures can be taken to alleviate.
The main problems caused by overuse of private vehicles can be listed as air pollution and heavy traffic congestion. Firstly, with regards to the former, because of the big number of cars in urban areas, the air quality gets worse and worse. This is one of the main reasons causing high rate of diseases that relate to lungs and respiratory all over the world. Secondly, traffic jam becomes an alarming problem and rush hours are extending in all metropolises. For example, although government has enacted new policies in order to reduce rush hour traffic burden, there remains high pressure for residents whenever they go to work in the morning or come back home from workplaces.
The possible solutions to these problems are to maximise the using of public transportation and tax increase on car purchase transactions. Public means like buses, shared cars, metro are popular ways to reducing heavy traffic jam. These vehicles are not only convenient but also very economical. Additionally, these troubles can be dealt with by the car sales tax increase, which is considered an effective way to limit over-purchase of cars. Needless to say, infrastructure in big cities is not good enough for many vehicles that can go down streets at the same time, hence car tax changes are also helpful for relieving stress from traffic jam.
In conclusion, over-dependence on cars can lead to a number of problems, yet public vehicles can be encouraged by the government to address these issues.
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- The graph below shows information on employment rates across 6 countries in 1995 and 2005. Summarise the information by choosing and describe the main idea, and make comparisons where appropriate. 67
- Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement. 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...for relieving stress from traffic jam. In conclusion, over-dependence on cars c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05128205128 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77478269746 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611721611722 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9193886789 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.076923077 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162170664843 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576937042182 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423070827086 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102298001999 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0187124123415 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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