You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter,
Describe the item
Explain where and when you left it
Say what action you would like the company to take.
Dear Sir/Madam,
my name is james bond, i am one of the passengers that boarded train 656 heading to Sydney from New South Wales Yesterday. I am writing to enquire if anyone on the train found my camera i forgot on the train.
it is a black cannon X pro camera with 25 mega pixel auto focus lens. it has a memory card of 1 terabyte, and it has a camera rope strap attached to it. my initials R.O are inscribed on the corner close to the top of the lens. In addition, the camera was inside a brown leather Gucci camera bag.
I must have left it in my seat which was seat number 10. it was beside me throughout the trip and i think i must have left it there when i was coming off the train due to the fact that i was in a haste to catch the bus home.
if someone from the train found it and returned, i would like the company to keep it for me. I would come and pick it personally next week.
looking forward to hearing from you,
Yours faithfully,
james bond
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, my name is james bond, i am one of the p...
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Line 3, column 187, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... if anyone on the train found my camera i forgot on the train. it is a black ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...nd my camera i forgot on the train. it is a black cannon X pro camera with 25 ...
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Line 5, column 65, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'lens' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'lenses'.
Suggestion: lenses
...ro camera with 25 mega pixel auto focus lens. it has a memory card of 1 terabyte, an...
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Line 5, column 71, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...era with 25 mega pixel auto focus lens. it has a memory card of 1 terabyte, and it...
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Line 5, column 168, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: O
...ope strap attached to it. my initials R.O are inscribed on the corner close to th...
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Line 7, column 58, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...it in my seat which was seat number 10. it was beside me throughout the trip and i...
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Line 7, column 99, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...t was beside me throughout the trip and i think i must have left it there when i ...
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Line 7, column 107, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...side me throughout the trip and i think i must have left it there when i was comi...
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Line 7, column 138, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... i think i must have left it there when i was coming off the train due to the fac...
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Line 7, column 186, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ming off the train due to the fact that i was in a haste to catch the bus home. ...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...s in a haste to catch the bus home. if someone from the train found it and ret...
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Line 9, column 50, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e from the train found it and returned, i would like the company to keep it for m...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Looking
...e and pick it personally next week. looking forward to hearing from you, Yours ...
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Line 11, column 37, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... looking forward to hearing from you, Yours faithfully, james bond
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Line 13, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... hearing from you, Yours faithfully, james bond
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 790.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.11458333333 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15017764124 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59375 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6364829394 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.8181818182 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4545454545 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09090909091 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 2.54639175258 628% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132187353001 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464647512755 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462952573499 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0760690378172 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450007800924 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.26 8.71597938144 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.54 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.