You recently attended a course in another country but had to leave the course to return back to your country. Write a letter to your teacher.
In the letter, you should:
thank him/her
tell them your situation
Explain them what you liked about their lecture
Dear Mr. Khan,
I am writing this letter to explain the reason for leaving the course early.
To begin with, I would like to express my gratitude for your assistance and guidance during the course. Without your help, significant improvements in my skills, such as skimming, scanning, and proof reading, would not have been possible.
The cause of leaving the classes was unavoidable. As you knew that my father was ill, he suffered from cardiac arrest that day. I cannot even explain how worried I was feeling at that time. Therefore, I rushed to the airport and bought a ticket of the very next flight to my country. Although he is out of danger, he is still under critical observation. Under these circumstances, I would prefer to stay with my family.
Anyways, there are not a few traits that I like about your lecture but several qualities make it distinctive. Firstly, your ability of explaining any concept numerous times with feeling frustrated. You also have the ability to involve your students and compel them to participate and your confidence to speak fluently will always be my inspiration.
I hope that you would understand the situation and look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Salman Khan
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, first, firstly, if, look, so, still, therefore, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1036.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02912621359 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67422421696 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665048543689 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3526887489 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7142857143 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 4.34317383033 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255951155057 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762193501016 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613537920284 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132748354193 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662348741225 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.