The natural resources such as oil, forests and fresh water are being consumed at a alarming rate. what problems does it cause? How can we solve these problems?
One of the global concerns these days is an increasing of exhaustedly consuming natural resources as the result of various development, especially in the fields of industry . I will outline two such risks, and also two possible counter-measures that we could take.
Firstly, climatic imbalance is mainly attributable to deforestation. Trees contribute effectively to ecosystem, maintaining temperature , for instance. The reduction of green cover is a fast way to heighten the earth’s temperature, partly causing the global greenhouse effect. Another consequence of cutting down woods wastefully is surely the possibility of people being swept away by flood when there are no trees preventing soil erosion in natural disasters. In the middle of Vietnam, people witness huge damages , which potentially fatal results. Secondly , it is obvious that disorderly usage of oil resources may cause some depletion in future. That means, the domestic and international increasing of oil price in many nations may well be connected to this phenomenon.
Turning to possible solution, the whole society could deal with these problems through taking strong remedies against excessive mineral usage by raising public awareness. Such a program could take many forms, ranging from advertising to dedicated education in classes, could be aimed at both climatic risks and economic imbalance causing by wasting natural resources.A further solution is to discover some new alternative energy that are eco-friendly and long-term. This idea will be practical only if there is a joint initiative between authorities and environmentalists
In conclusion, the danger of overusing natural resource are visible. However, it would be solved by several solutions related to better education and scientific developments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77819548872 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1891899888 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.687969924812 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6597849546 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.230769231 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204406013681 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552427816934 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370983650358 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111936812163 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0126803709133 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.24 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.21 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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