Essay topics: Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
It is true that the setting of homeworks is indispensable to children in most of countries when they return home after studying at school.Some individuals think that it is not essential for children to do homeworks,while i believe that giving homework brings numerous benefits to children in school age .
On the one hand,there are several reasons why some people suppose that homeworks are unnecessary burden on student.Firstly, many parents think that studying -time at school is long enough providing their kids knowledge to practise in life. It can be seen that children must study at school about 8-9 hours per day which makes them tired and stress. Therefore, they need to take a rest and entertain as beneficial as the perspective of brain development.Secondly, some countries still outperform other countries,where homework is the norm. Finland,for instance,regularly top international educational league table in the world.Student in Finland is not given homework and do not take any exams weekly ar school.
On the other hand,homework has an important role to play in children because some of reasons. The first reason is that it helps the children improve educational outcomes when they do homeworks more to understand deeply their received knowledge.Besides,homework will encourage independent learning skill if the childrens are challenged their tasks in own pace and find new things by themselves without the support of teacher.Finally, the children could create independent studying habit when they consolidate concepts and definition taught in classroom by doing homeworks.Some recent researchs show that about 50% in the number of students develop and reaches high results with self- learning habit more than other students.
In conclusion, homework certainly has its drawbacks ,but i believe that the benefits outweigh in the long term .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51578947368 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.50967084776 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624561403509 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 165.14917499 49.4020404114 334% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 196.5 106.682146367 184% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.625 20.7667163134 172% => OK
Discourse Markers: 18.5 7.06120827912 262% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334100442233 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149705881558 0.084324248473 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0911917069955 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185972228683 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620098848266 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.4 13.0946893788 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.33 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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