Nowadays, people living in large cities face many problems in their daily lives. What are the problems? Do you think the government should encourage people to move to smaller towns?
Habitat in the metropolitan cities is worsening day by day. Individuals find it difficult to cope with the problems of urban regions. Unhealthy environment and the high cost of living are the biggest challenges to survive. Although the government should support the survival to rural regions, in which natural resources can be utilized effectively.
A predominant factor is living expenses. the rise in the development hike the prices of the product, thus everyone is not able to afford all the amenities. For illustration, the city like Mumbai in India is becoming one of the costly city in Asia. The development of skyscrapers and other residential complex raise the rent charges to extremely unaffordable levels. Hence, it becomes difficult to survive for low-income holders. Another factor is the rise in pollution levels, as the city is getting crowded with traffic and other facilities. For instance, air contamination caused by major pollutants like fuels, industrial waste makes it difficult to breathe even.
Therefore, law enforcement agencies must promote the rural living style and makes people aware of the benefits in village life. The rural side shifting of society can help the government to release the tension of overcrowded cities and promote the healthy life culture throughout the nation including urban areas. By this means, natural products such as water can be easily availed by the community.
In conclusion, living in large cities is getting difficult day by day with the rise in pollution to alarming levels and price hike in the commodities makes it difficult to survive. Consequently, travelling back to the countryside is the best option to solve these problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 212, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'surviving'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: surviving
...st of living are the biggest challenges to survive. Although the government should support...
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Line 3, column 42, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... predominant factor is living expenses. the rise in the development hike the prices...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32713754647 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92058956787 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576208178439 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.5581946543 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5625 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8125 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114382081368 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.033354296656 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0288867255995 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0675792674518 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235252171495 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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