Overpopulation in many major urban centers around the world is a major problem. What are the causes of this? How can this problem be solved?
Majority of the population is crowded in main cities which is leading to a crucial problem of overpopulation. This essay will discuss the main causes of this such as concentrated development only in one city and lack of proper planning in enhancing the infrastructure in smaller cities. This essay will also suggest solutions like development of infrastructure in tier two cities and generation of employment in smaller cities through encouraging local businesses.
The problem of excessive population growth in major cities is due to the concentrated development in one city and planning failure to develop smaller cities at the same time. This can be attributed to the sudden boom in the technically skilled jobs which needed ready infrastructure. Due to such a sudden necessity, the government concentrated more on developing the existing city with good infrastructure and this led to lack of development in smaller cities which had the potential to provide desired economic results. For example, in a developing country like India, Delhi had enough infrastructure to accommodate the sudden growth of jobs, so the government concentrated on developing the same city even more, but they neglected one of the smaller cities like Lucknow which had enough land area, connectivity, and potential to create the same impact. Due to such act of government, the city of Lucknow remains underdeveloped compared to Delhi. Hence, for such planning failure of government, there is an imbalanced growth between the cities which eventually led to excessive population in major cities.
As the saying goes, ‘Every problem has in it the seeds of its own solution,’ there are solutions for the above discussed problems as well. The government needs to classify all the important cities which are facing problem of excessive population and then they need to identify smaller cities which have enough resources both in terms of human power and infrastructure. Then they should develop policies to encourage the local business which eventually create employment for locals. If they can pull this act, then the migration of population from smaller cities can be curbed. For example, a smaller city which is rich in agricultural resources receives support from the government, then there will be more of investment into the agricultural businesses, by which they can create more employment. Therefore, above mentioned are the few solutions which can control overpopulation.
To conclude, for a country to progress in long run, there needs to be a balanced developmental approach between major and smaller cities. This essay discussed the problems why major cities get overcrowded such as concentrated growth and lack of proper planning. This essay also suggested solutions such as developing infrastructure in smaller cities and boosting local businesses through developmental policies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 80, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, then, therefore, well, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 41.998997996 169% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.3376753507 288% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2441.0 1615.20841683 151% => OK
No of words: 447.0 315.596192385 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46085011186 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15928028269 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.407158836689 0.561755894193 72% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 765.0 506.74238477 151% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.1360514427 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.611111111 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8333333333 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160489953042 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740983736158 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560609999398 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132065202374 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037209498232 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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