You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
tell him which team won
describe the conditions on the day
say how you felt about the match
Dear......,
Hope you are well and recover from your ankle injury. I have very disappointed when I heard news of your accident. But it is a good news that our team won the match by five scores as well as test series.
All players were so worried about the match because it was last match of the series and in order to attain trophy it was must for us to win the match. Initially our players performance not good just because of absence of two superfast bowlers. Batsman played with great enthusiasm and acquired target score before completion of fifty overs.
I had no words to express my happiness when our team won the match and all players jumped in the air with great courage. Then I thanked God for such moment of happiness and at the last prize distribution ceremony presided over by the president of Cricket Board.
Best wishes for your early recovery.
Mandeep kaur.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear......, Hope you are well and recover from your ...
^^^
Line 2, column 126, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'good news'.
Suggestion: good news
... heard news of your accident. But it is a good news that our team won the match by five sco...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 205, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... by five scores as well as test series. All players were so worried about the ma...
^^^^
Line 4, column 263, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...over by the president of Cricket Board. Best wishes for your early recovery. M...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, thus, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 723.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6050955414 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37955850388 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.675159235669 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4410424579 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.3333333333 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4444444444 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180938900647 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600897540115 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396881315463 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0961551705 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276627115301 0.0580467560999 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.