The bar chart below shows the percentage of people living alone in 5 different age groups in the USA between 1850 and 2000
The bar chart below compares the proportion of USA citizen who living alone in various age groups from 1850 to 2000
Overall, it is clear that the percentage of all age group increased significantly over the period. The highest proportion is in the 55-64 age group.
There was a slight growth in the percentage of 55-64 and 47-54 age group from 3%, 2.5% in 1850 to just below 4%, 3% in 1990, respectively. The figure stayed the same 2.5% in the 37-46 age group over 50 years from 1850. In 1990, the proportion of 27-36 age group appeared just above 2%.
In 1950, the figure of four age groups rose continuously, and the new appearance of the percentage of 17-26 age group accounted for nearly 2%. Fifty years later, the proportion of the 55-64 age group reached a peak of 17%, and this group also had the largest figure of jumping about 14% in the whole period. In 2000, the percentage of 47-54, 37-46, 27-36, 17-36 age group also grew dramatically and reached their highest point at 13%, 7%, 8%, 5% over 150 years, respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 860.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64864864865 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47119859545 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535135135135 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4275608033 43.030603864 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.5 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 5.23603664747 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344408539744 0.215688989381 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170576024098 0.103423049105 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113639044571 0.0843802449381 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261335158244 0.15604864568 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127027962032 0.0819641961636 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.97 61.2550243902 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.5 10.3012195122 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.57 8.06136585366 81% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 40.7170731707 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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