"It is usually foolish to get married before completing your studies and getting established in a good job".
Do you agree or disagree?
Although such topics, in all likelihood, will never yield a consensual agreement, a constructive dialogue on getting married before the graduation and settlement a stable career can lead to thought-provoking discussions. My opinion is that irrespective to the numerous arguments that exit on either side, I am strongly agree on completing the studies and joining a reputable career path before engaging to any family commitment.
There are a number of reasons in favor of my stance. To begin with, having graduation is a significant target, and it should not be disturbed by any other personal commitment such marriage. It is important to note that if any person got married at his early age while being at university, it would be having a direct negative effect on his concentration on the study and would be distracted therefore, the aforementioned argument shows that marriage effects negatively on the youngster educational plan.
Another pivotal role of the arguments is that involvement in family commitment such marriage is not a wise decision for students, and a lot of arrangement should be considered before to take such important step. Unless people land in a job with sufficient financial income to cover all marriage obligations, they should not take a step towards it. This exemplifies that early marriage before getting a job is not a recommended for students.
I see that there is equally potential evidence to support the arguments I have provided, and hence, my opinion is that students should finish their studies and be employed before their marriage to have stable family life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 320, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...that exit on either side, I am strongly agree on completing the studies and joining a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, therefore, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 259.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21621621622 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08389088164 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567567567568 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.5024630542 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.0022221893 50.4703680194 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.111111111 104.977214359 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7777777778 20.9669160288 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 7.25397266985 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124123507807 0.242375264174 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548750128107 0.0925447433944 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489056834271 0.071462118173 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0752289735581 0.151781067708 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459055816792 0.0609392437508 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 12.6369458128 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 53.1260098522 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.9458128079 141% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.3980295567 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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