Some people prefer to plan activities for their free time very carefully. Others choose not to make any plans at all for their free time. Compare the benefits of planning free-time activities with the benefits of not making plans. Which do you prefer: planning or not planning for your leisure time? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your choice.
Nowadays activities for our spare time are becoming more and more essential for people than it used to be decades ago. Some individuals opt for planning their actions for leisure time. While others people choose to spend this time spontaneously without any plans. In this essay I am going to overview both points of view.
On the one hand, making plans for your spare time enables a person to be sure in their schedule for a day. What I mean is that people can exactly know their actions during their spare time and be calm. For example, If I want to go to cinema on a premiere, I ask the friends of mine and make a reservation or buy tickets. In fact, I can be quiet for visiting the premiere since it is difficult to change plans. Besides, it is excellent opportunity to plan your working schedule when ones has a scenario. If people have a flextime, a designing leisure time is the best choice for them. Moreover, a person is able to save money if they making a plan for a day since we can estimate our future costs, especially if we are speaking about going to a cafe or to a restaurant, for instance.
On the other hand, without plans people are able to obtain more pleasure and joy than with it. That is because a person cannot predict future actions. Consequently, it is possible to acquire more surprise. What is more, people often get the most memorable memories when they do something spontaneously. And then these memories warm people's soul during the life.
As for me, I do have a strict schedule which does not allow me to live without planning my activities as well as my spare time. That is why, I have to plan my leisure time.
Having weighed up all pros and cons, I have arrived to the conclusion that to plan or not to depend people's work, their working schedule and their possibilities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 186, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...lanning their actions for leisure time. While others people choose to spend this time...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, if, moreover, so, then, well, while, as for, for example, for instance, i mean, in fact, speaking about, as well as, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 330.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51515151515 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53220940705 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521212121212 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.9143954856 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.4210526316 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3684210526 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.45110844103 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.371506575027 0.236089414692 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114746603038 0.076458572812 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862646370959 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201512156336 0.150856017488 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0852916389916 0.0645574589148 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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