You are living overseas and you have just come across an article about your country in a magazine where some of the information are incorrect. Write a letter to the editor.
you should :
Expain that an rticle contains wrong information
supply the correct information
provide some more interesting information for the editor to publish in future.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this, in connection to the article you had published in a newsletter of “Daily Magazine of India”. The topic was “Crime control over politics” which was printer on 10th February 2019. The topic was interesting as it caught my eye on it. However, some information I found incorrect about Prime Minister leading to the cause of terrorist attacks to take wisdom place in upcoming elections.
Undoubtedly, India’s prime minister is one of the honorable and respectable positions in the country and nobody will dare to do such crime for its well-being. Terrorist does not belongs to any community, does so, allegations on prime minister are also fake. Instead, he has done so much of work for the country. It is merely a strong opposition shot to deteriorate party image and PM’s as well. No evidences of such had been found till now and the terrorist group “Mujahid-din” had taken the responsibility of the recent attack which had been confirmed.
Nonetheless, I would request to you rectify this article to avoid any unnecessary chaos in the country. Also, you can display the work done by PM or the party works in the field of Skill India campaign or Make in India or FDI. You will definitely find interesting data on these platforms.
I would hope that the suggestions would be taken care and corrected at the earliest.
Yours Sincerely
Vivek
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 184, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belong'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: belong
... for its well-being. Terrorist does not belongs to any community, does so, allegations ...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 184, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'belong'
Suggestion: belong
... for its well-being. Terrorist does not belongs to any community, does so, allegations ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, nonetheless, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1187.0 937.175257732 127% => OK
No of words: 234.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07264957265 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16832718842 2.54303337028 125% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641025641026 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 290.88556701 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4132367671 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7857142857 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7142857143 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117122244957 0.216113520407 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0406568050359 0.0766984524023 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450851400294 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0693223720576 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544293261093 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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