For the past year you have been a member of a local club. Now you want to discontinue your membership. Write a letter to the club secretary. In your letter state what type of membership you have and how you have paid for this., give details of how you have benefited from the club and explain why you want to leave
Dear Thomas
I am writing this letter with a great regret, That I will not be able to continue my member ship further.
My name is Sadiq ,Currently a member of this community club with premium family membership.
and have paid the annual fee of 250 dollars online with no pending dues.
By profession I am software engineer working for Infosys Ltd , I have been transferred to work on a project abroad
for next 6 years ,so me and my family are relocating to UK on 6th Aug 2019 .
However, I enjoyed participating in the social events organized by the club ,I will not hesitate to express that it benefited me in understanding people from various ethnicity and culture.
Furthermore, the recreational activities for kids helped my children to boost their dancing and singing abilities.
I would like to take this opportunity to thank all commit members for considering me and my family as part of this
wonderful community. And appreciate your efforts to keep this club rolling.
Yours faithfully
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-04-05 | mohamed.sadiq | 78 | view |
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...ty. And appreciate your efforts to keep the this club rolling. Yours faithfully
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 847.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92441860465 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84145858797 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.691860465116 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.1191413396 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.875 76.5299724578 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.29896907216 209% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 2.54639175258 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195906691696 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811435561852 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327043872611 0.0603063233224 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0743285363315 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295986646654 0.0580467560999 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.