You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town.
Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you.
You should write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir,
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to ask if you would be generous as to provide some information about the electronic items which i would like to buy from your store.
Basically, I am looking for a portable 10Gb Hard drive and USB Wireless Lan card which is hard to find in nearby store in my town. Even, it is not available online. Apparently, it seems that some superstores are selling but it is hard to distinguish the version whether its SATA or ATA type disc as well as compatibility of WIFI hardware with my system. would you be able to hold it for me until last of this month or order, if not in stock currently? However, i will try to come early due to it's imperative demand, not want others to take before me.
Furthermore, I urge you to provide me the quote for 10GB Hard dive, USB WIFI card along with its availability on my email id manuo@gmail.com or call me +1 647-993-4444 as i need this to finish my school project.
I hope that my request will not inconvenience you too much.
Your Faithfully,
Anshul Gupta
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 122, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...mation about the electronic items which i would like to buy from your store. B...
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Line 5, column 355, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Would
...bility of WIFI hardware with my system. would you be able to hold it for me until las...
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Line 5, column 456, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...or order, if not in stock now? However, i will try to come early due to its imper...
^
Line 6, column 114, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...IFI card along with its availability as i need this to finish my school project. ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, furthermore, however, if, look, so, well, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 798.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40883977901 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54360944816 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640883977901 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.9823765255 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6666666667 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1111111111 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.44444444444 4.34317383033 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186130446392 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702178999762 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711718939707 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116692990984 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616563932069 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.