What is the happiness?
We live in an age when the essential life definitions, particularly happiness, are becoming a blurred due to the changing of lifestyle to more vibrant. Many people cannot describe this term, however, there are the primary things which are considered as a fundamental in acquiring happiness. The given essay is aimed at providing my opinion of the complex notion through the outer and inner life components.
When considering happiness, it becomes clear that the feeling of pleasure and satisfaction are the widespread view about of it. It follows that people aspire to achieve the contentment having the external triggers such as money, drugs, food. Similarly, social hierarchies also influence to acquisition of satisfaction. According to psychological researches, employee having engaged a high position at work experiences a positive emotion whether doing a favorite activity or getting a worthy salary.
On the other hand, some people believe that happiness is a state, which could be possessed from an inner relationship to life values. Being started a supportive family is a good illustration of providing someone the happiness that could not be achieved by being single. It is evident that a strong bond between siblings affect the inner sensations of a person which are the vital part of living well. Moreover, the material wealth in such the definition of happiness does not included since it is a secondary aspect of life to maintain biological needs, such as hunger, thirst.
In conclusion, from my perspective happiness is the pivotal notion for people regardless of the sophisticated definition is a consequence of impact external and internal factors of the human environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 477, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'include'
Suggestion: include
...ch the definition of happiness does not included since it is a secondary aspect of life ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, second, similarly, so, well, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37453183521 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06135733125 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61797752809 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5354507508 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.583333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0996592817022 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0320170670165 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453195664624 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0572238882473 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587098963811 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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