All cars that burn fossil fuel should be banned and electric cars should replace them.
agree/ disagree
Electric cars should be used instead of cars that run on fossil fuel and a ban on such automobiles using fossil fuel has to be implemented. I totally agree with the above statement as i feel that using fossil fuel can produce massive amounts of pollution which can lead to poor health among people, moreover, production of cars and pollution generated by them can cause global warming, and ultimate destruction of the planet.
Firstly, pollution created by automobiles is the leading reason for respiratory ailments in general public. For example, people living in cities such as Delhi and Mumbai are more prone for bronchial asthma, whereas the individuals in rural areas and villages are less vulnerable . Additionally, increase in such vehicles can cause health issues such as lung cancers among people such as policemen who are constantly exposed to smoke on the roads.
Secondly, global warming is a crisis situation which needs to be addressed as early as possible. Main reason for all theses effects is excessive production and reliance on fossil fuel vehicles in the recent years. Depletion of ozone layer and melting of polar caps of ice can eventually make the world unstable due to rising sea levels.
In conclusion, stopping the use of fossil fuel burning cars and banning them while shifting to electric cars instead, is a good idea. i believe that this is a positive trend and shall make the environment less polluted thus preventing many dangerous health issues among world population and, likewise, this can avoid global warming and rise in sea levels which may destroy our mother earth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, likewise, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, whereas, while, as to, for example, i feel, in conclusion, in general, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08301886792 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59909325935 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592452830189 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.5884477438 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.7 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.1 7.06120827912 214% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279087274027 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109998928118 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.16133980026 0.0667982634062 242% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157824541814 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135357710227 0.056905535591 238% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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