new parents should attend classes for growth and development of their children.
do you agree or diagree
parenting course should be taken by new parents to make sure that their offsprings grow well. I totally agree to this statement as I believe, that only a trained mother and father could take good care of their children. Lots of families now are nuclear and away from grandparents who would taught theses to the young couples.
Firstly, all parents with newborn babes need parenting skills, and training is mandatory, to give good care for the child, especially learning how to breast feed and nappy changing are crucial for the well-being and the physical development of the baby. Moreover, knowing about certain aspects of health such as vaccination,health insurance and registration of birth might be very handy, if learnt early in the parenthood. A survey conducted by US government in 2015 say's that " most young women who got married recently did not know how to plan pregnancy, delivery and child care after maternity. Because of the above problems its is imperative to attend some classes before having a child.
Secondly, many parent live away from their parents due to various reasons such as work,study and many more. Hence knowledge of key features of parenting is not passed down to them, and lack of grandparents thus jeopardises the growth of the children. A recent study by who revealed that most mothers in developed countries did not have any idea about breast-feeding until the midwives and doctors taught them.
To sum up, I feel it is very much essential for new parents to get adequate knowledge about the child-birth and child care as its is vital for the babies growth and development, and most of the young parents are away from their orginal families thus having no help from family members.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Parenting
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Suggestion: , health
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...elivery and child care after maternity. Because of the above problems its is imperative...
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Suggestion: , study
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...asons such as work,study and many more. Hence knowledge of key features of parenting ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'babies'' or 'baby's'?
Suggestion: babies'; baby's
... and child care as its is vital for the babies growth and development, and most of the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, i feel, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96896551724 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68808309494 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610344827586 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.9158747918 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.0 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3636363636 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.81818181818 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254835534888 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877166435234 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685682793353 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150012339166 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325600825824 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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