In many countries, government spent a large amount of money on improving internet access. Why is it happening and do you think it is the most appropriate use of government money?
Nowadays, in many parts of the world, goveronments have started investing heavely on developing better internet access. Due to the massive wave of globalisation and e-commerce that was witness in last few years throught out the planet most of the people are restorting or shifting their focus towards online sales and services. I hope this is a appropriate use of public money provided all other basic needs of a citizen are fulfilled by the goveronments.
Goveronments expenditure on delivering high speed internet access is a complex and debateable topic. All developing nations such as China, India and South-eastern countries which are the current manufactaring hubs of the world are perhaps requiring good net connectivity to have better economic growth and trade using online purchases and delivery of goods. Some third world countries in Africa are also funding for internet connections to develop there knowledge and skills using certain applications such as google ( web based search engine)and youtube (online video streaming program). For few rich western countries it could be just a matter of pride and power, since they hold the fastest and the most saphosticated technology.
Again, this expenditure on internet is highly questionable in certain conditions, especially in countries which donot require such advanced technology like some places in western and central africa were no basic facilities such a food, shelter, clothing and work are not available for the masses properly. Hence, such countries need to refrane themselves from unneccessary financial burden in the name of internet.
To sum up, I opine that ineternet availability is very crucial for any countrie's developement and economic growth, despite of their status, wealth or impoverish. I think that it is unfare to spend on internet communications on the part of some poor nations who cannot give basic facilties to their citizens.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, third, i think, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42474916388 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96934973365 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635451505017 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.6358441537 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.454545455 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1818181818 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109809321857 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0454386644245 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358143101786 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.066042276189 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425740944104 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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