Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and as a result, people gravitate towards buying their products.
What problems does it cause?
What could be done to encourage people to buy local products?
Two days ago, I read an article about the influence of big enterprises on the local habit of shopping. The author states that both promo actions and advertisements, which are widely used by wealthy corporations, affect their preferences. This essay will consider the problems of this change and suggest steps to stimulating people to buy domestic goods.
The first problem is the closure of small companies. When a corporation opens its branches in the region, many smaller entrepeneurs start to suffer from the unequal competition with it since they have little finding to either introduce themselves in the media nor hold promotions. Another problem with large businesses is high prices. Once a weak rivalry in the market is reached by various advertising campaigns, they gradually increase the prices for their products and services. The last problem is a monotony in products. As soon as corporation dominates in the market, it has no interest in attempting to offer alternative products. As a result, people cannot enjoy other high-quality products, which are devised by other companies, at a lower price.
One of the measures to arouse public interest in buying local products is for the government to introduce them to the market. Generally, it is hardly possible to find the information about domestic producers, since they do not have as much budget for advertisement as big ones. Despite this, if the government supported them by allocating some time for small companies on state channels, they would have the opportunity to show their local products to the public. Consequently, domestic manucturers would be well known to society and be able to compete with large businesses.
In conclusion, large companies pose many problems to the local market by decreasing the number of small businesses, increasing prices and providing no options to consumers. In spite of this, the government could raise public awareness of local products by showing their products of internal manufacturers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, so, well, in conclusion, as a result, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30188679245 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97252159899 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588050314465 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2665314996 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.375 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290736262484 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853812178017 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038994280724 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159685815801 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281064189595 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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