Some people think that sport teaches children how to compete, while other believe that children learn teamwork. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Many people argue that children should be more competitive, while others think that learning teamwork would contribute to their development. In my opinion, I believe that both competitive and teamwork are encouraged to children when they come to sport.
There are good reasons why sport enables children to understand how to compete. Firstly, when young people start competing with others, they push the body’s physical limit in order to surpass competitors. For example, some professional swimmers have to spend long hours to do the workout every day if they want to be a person who breaks the Olympic records. Secondly, to be successful in sport, children need to be handle negative emotions such as control nerves and overcome fear. For example, in some strategy games like chess or go, players usually take a deep breath in middle game that not only improve thinking ability but also deal with time pressure.
Alongside the influence of winning in sport, children also learn about teamwork. First, one of the key benefits of teamwork is cooperation. Working as a team teaches one to keep personal differences aside, and focus on the team success. For instance, in football match, the kids who play goalkeeper should be encouraged as this position most often forgotten and neglected. Another advantage of teamwork is that is provides the players an opportunity to socialize and build relations, as they come together with a common interest and love for the sport. Being a part of a team helps players overcome their shyness, as they are forced to interact with other teammates, some of whom they might have never met or spoken to, before. In fact, bonding between teammates is the key, as it indicates how successful the team would prove to be.
In conclusion, I believe that sports are not only bring competitive spirit but also improve teamwork ability for children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
... successful the team would prove to be. In conclusion, I believe that sports are...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07096774194 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65631793541 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609677419355 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6379323505 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.8 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.86666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295988026247 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103674746406 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0959322105761 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211933674409 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106541513528 0.056905535591 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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