. Writing a letter to ex colleague that you are visiting him.
-agenda -why visiting -meeting arrangements?
I am writing this letter to tell you that I would be visiting your town next month and it would be really great if you could take some time off for me from your busy schedule.
next month, I will be visiting London for two weeks from 1st april to 14th april for business purposes. So, one weekend either on Saturday or Sunday as per your convenience we could catch up and spend time together as we used to do in our company. Remembering the old days, we can also make it fruitful by teaching me the new version of Excel, in which you are an expert. I have already started with the basics of it. Without wasting your time, I would be able to grasp the advanced content which you would teach me. Learning this would be an added advantage as well as great for my career prospects. we can either meet at my hotel room which is close by to your home or any coffee shop, whichever is suitable for you.
Looking forward to meeting you and share some quality time.
Yours faithfully,
Cathy James.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...me off for me from your busy schedule. next month, I will be visiting London fo...
^^
Line 2, column 3, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Next
... off for me from your busy schedule. next month, I will be visiting London for tw...
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Line 2, column 603, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
... well as great for my career prospects. we can either meet at my hotel room which ...
^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e shop, whichever is suitable for you. Looking forward to meeting you and share...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, really, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 809.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32620320856 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18048087358 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668449197861 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4359517391 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.9 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126107973804 0.216113520407 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465927073341 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514220213178 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112367817309 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377942897447 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.