Some people think that the only way to judge someone’s success in business is by the amount of money they make.
Is this a true indicator of the success of a business and in what other ways could success in a business be measured?
It is true that money gained in a business becomes the indicator of success predominantly in the society. As money is the factor that governs all subjects it is hard for the general society to see and measure the underlying many success factors that are measurable. Today’s world has vastly changed the way of business from conventional methods to more innovative and technologically advanced ways due to the internet revolution along with the mobile phones. This essay will point out the other ways of success that are also measured in the business.
The great Nicolas Tesla couldn’t make big money but still his product of invention the so called “AC current” is being widely used for past 5 decades. In such a case the inventor has created success in establishing his product of invention. He is widely accepted as the master and father of invention. In the case of Apple’s CEO Steve Jobs has made success in creating i-phones though he couldn’t live long, people still quote and praise his achievements for the innovation rather than the money worthiness.
The engineering and construction sector has its own glory in such a way where they have not made huge profits but build the marvelous structures and machines that had defied the conventional thoughts and process. They are well known for the success that is measured to the potential of engineering and technology rather than money. Most of the engineering firms today push themselves hard to win projects in quotes lower than the estimates of the client just to deliver caliber and earn expertise.
Therefore, due to the various new technological business has evolved it is obvious that success of business is not necessarily to be the amount of money it has accumulated.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, still, therefore, well, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07560137457 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9376840941 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563573883162 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5131856737 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.083333333 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388627699219 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136511190263 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101656948351 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231017687189 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113427459349 0.056905535591 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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