Recent figures show an increase in violent crime among youngsters under the age of 18. Some psychologists claim that the basic reason for this is that children these days are not getting the social and emotional learning they need from parents and teachers.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What solutions can you suggest?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples
crime among children is fastly growing in many parts of the world. As per recent figures youngsters under 18 years of age involved in violent criminal activities have increased. According to a few psychologists the cause behind this scenario is due to absence to social and emotional learning from their parents and teachers. I strongly believe that this true because we see more and more kids committing crimes such are very mortal in nature and attributing theses to father,mother and educators is not appropriate. The best solution is to educate the children early in their childhood, give financial support to the family in upbringing of the child and government policy changes for at-risk youngsters.
educations is very important for every child and he or she have to be taught about certain values in life such as honesty, obedience, loyalty and peace. For example, schools have to join moral science in to all subject as early as possible. Next step is to provide financial support to poor families so that the parents can put their children in schools and colleges. this adds a key change in the entire society and can bring about some positive changes in the outlook of the children.
government policy to protect and prevent people in communities and areas which are prone of criminal activities. Necessary action needed to be taken by the authorities to avoid exploitation of children in such localities. For example, relocation of first time offenders (young children) to a secure place elsewhere in the country.
I conclusion, it is imperative to have good social structure, to help people prevent the drifting of their children towards wrong directions in life. Simple actions like providing education,finances and new government policies can bring vast changes in the nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16095890411 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87693043857 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599315068493 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9399229131 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.642857143 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217345399117 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673523816916 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060457105188 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112547687645 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0929094930653 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.