Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, inspite of greater resposibilites.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, there has been a constant debate on happiest times of one's life. Few individuals believe that the teenage period are exciting part of many people's lives. Whilst, other people think that adulthood have more fun, in spite of holding higher responsibility. In my perspective, it depends on each person how they felt about their childhood and their adult life.
There are numerous reasons why teenagers would have best time in their life. Firstly, young people have an ample amount of time to enjoy, for example, school children have their set friends whom they spend their most of their time by either playing or hanging out. Secondly, as children have no pressure and responsibilities they tend to do anything without thinking about the repercussions. Lastly, all the teens have an upper hand by parents supporting them, let us imagine a child wishes to get a bike, he will immediately ask his parents and they will make sure their child gets it, thus the parents support helps them to be happy.
Having said that, there are many other reasons where adulthood is none the less than teen's life. For instance, every adult has their freedom of calling their own shots, a recent study shows that older people are 60% happier than the younger people and this is due to having their freedom to do anything. Furthermore, there are many things which only adults are permitted to do, example, if you go to any night pubs, casino and bar etc., only adults will allowed to enter to enjoy the facilities.
To conclude, there has been talk by some people that childhood time is the greatest time, however, others felt it was the adult life that has the full package. I believe it is depends on every individual some may had a good time when they were young, others may had great time when were adults.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77635782748 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36687528675 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600638977636 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9644292826 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0769230769 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209198036843 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869316456889 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553337638461 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144432178371 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633478591554 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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