Do you agree or disagree with following statement?
Universities should give the same amount of money to their students’ sports activities as they give to their university libraries
The champions believe that “healthy body has active brain” it means that all student must do some exercise or sports. Therefore, universities should spend money for students sport team and help them to continue that, because without sport they cannot think in positive ways. So, I believe that universities should give the same amount of money to their students sports activities as they give to their universities libraries and I have some reasons like sport Is health, student use opportunities to be famous in the country, benefit for universities and students .
First, sport means health. When student or people do some sport their brain start activities they can understand better. For instance, once I was a lazy student. So, my doctor told me to do some exercises and I stared swam and after few months. I feel a big change in my studying also myself. However, I ask all universities to give the same amount of money to their students sport activities as they give to their university libraries. Without fresh full mind students cannot continue their studying.
Next, students should do some sport in university. So, they can start new match among other universities. These matches help students to know their cultures and it is helpful for them. So, I love this activities in university it is a method for better learning and exchange our knowledge. Therefore, universities can find some special talents in different fields of sports like swimming, wrestling, martial arts. However, I like that all universities should give the same amount of money to their students’ sports activities as they give to their universities libraries.
Third, sport activities increase positive thing among students and help them to know their studying and it is a good benefit for universities in publicity and increase the credit among people, also good for students. So, my people have a proverb that say “game of win, win”. However, with sport students can increase their mind activity or good thinker. Therefore, I like that the universities spend some money for sport activities like they spend money for libraries.
To summarize, it is good ideas that universities give some money for libraries. On the other hand, they must give the same amount of money for students’ sports activities. With good brain they can know their lessons better and they can understand their cultures, benefit for universities they can be famous among the society. So, I strongly like that universities should give the same amount of money to their students’ sports activities as they give their universities libraries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, therefore, third, for instance, i feel, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2211.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 424.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21462264151 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86853735803 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.377358490566 0.524837075471 72% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 672.3 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.5662562941 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.125 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.556425568196 0.236089414692 236% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.202799559199 0.076458572812 265% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.193362715495 0.0737576698707 262% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.422749388875 0.150856017488 280% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100364706685 0.0645574589148 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.71 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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