Many people are against training dolphins to perform in the circus because it may injure these animals.
many countries all across the globe are becoming richer as they develop and at the same time these countries are apparently seeing a reduction in the size of families. this circumstance clearly links to the development of countries and the changing perspective of people to have a small nuclear family rather than an extended family.
One of the causes for smaller family units is the fact that the modern world provides women with more options in lifestyle. it is acknowledged that women have great role in societies. having more opportunities for education and job they have less time for their family and thus, for growing up many children. Another contribution to this trend is due to increasing living cost and the cost of life necessities!!. If family size were still large as before, there would be lots of expenses like construction of a big house or childcare, which would bring a family into miserable poor life. Therefore, small size of family has highly beneficial impacts on quality of life.
this growing trend has an impact on societies in numerous ways. One of the positive effects is that the number of population will decline, which is great contribution to less poverty as there will be less competition for scarce resources. it gives opportunity to parents to provide a better education to their children. this is because, it will cost less, which will be beneficial for societies as a whole. When it comes to negative impact of this trend, the number of workforce will be fewer, thus, sustainability of future economic growth will be under threat.
To sum up, family size has fallen due to life condition, living cost and working of women and this can have negative and positive impacts on society. Despite any effects, as countries develop, this trend will likely continue to increase in near future.
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- studies have suggested that nowadays, children watch much more television than they did in the past and spend less time on active or creative things. what are the reasons and effects of this trend. 78
- studies have suggested that nowadays, children watch much more television than they did in the past and spend less time on active or creative things. what are the reasons and effects of this trend. 78
- Many people are against training dolphins to perform in the circus because it may injure these animals. 11
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, if, so, still, therefore, thus, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98697068404 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71107239426 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527687296417 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0612863831 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.066666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4666666667 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86666666667 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.026196886083 0.244688304435 11% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00885729544374 0.084324248473 11% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0192999898876 0.0667982634062 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0209394600976 0.151304729494 14% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293601400185 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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