in recent years, more and more people tend to live alone. does it a positive or negative trend. what are the causes of this trend?
An increasing number of individuals prefer to live in their separate homes. In my opinion, this phenomenon has a detrimental impact on society because it causes health problems among people, and the major reason for this trend is that individuals want to maintain privacy in their lives.
People who prefer to live alone often suffer from multifarious psychological problems. This is because when men and women live away from their family members, it becomes difficult for them to share their personal and professional problems with them. As a result, people are mostly unable to find solutions to these problems, leading to stress, frustration, and depression among them. For instance, a recent survey conducted by the Punjab Health Administration found that 70% of the adults who suffer from severe depression are those who live alone in their apartment.
The main reason for which a large number of people prefer to live alone is that they want to enjoy privacy in their lives. In other words, most individuals do not tolerate the interference of others in their personal lives because they believe that it will decrease their enjoyment and freedom. Moreover, there are many activities that are considered taboo in society, but youngsters often want to participate in them. Therefore, they mostly decide to live away from their families when they are financially independent. For example, recent research revealed that 60% of the undergraduates at Chandigarh University who choose to reside in hostels are those whose parents do not allow them to pursue their hobbies.
To conclude, living individually causes various mental disorders among people, and the reason for this phenomenon is that individuals often prefer to do what they want which is difficult while living with others.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 27, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...apartment. The main reason for which a large number of people prefer to live alone is that the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, as a result, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28321678322 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75408418637 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520979020979 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.512742416 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.916666667 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127151049604 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517117701586 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361615162475 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0937158861123 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290130422087 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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