Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems.
Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
Population in cities and urban areas is constantly increasing, this has led to many bad consequences. Over population can cause pollution, crowding, inflation, traffic congestion, communicable diseases and many more problem. In this essay I will be dealing with a few of the issues above in detail and give possible solutions.
Firstly, pollution in all form (air, water, sound) shall cause a major health and environmental damage among the people, hence people should prevent unnecessary spillage of harmful substances into water and air. Likewise, governments need to have stringent laws against industries that pollute water and air. Citizens need to avoid Public meetings, political rally's and functions held in open to decrease sound pollution. Furthermore, dustbins and waste segregation and collection systems need encouragement. Private bodies, self-help groups and charitable organisations who are showing interest in restoring lakes and ponds could be recognised and employed by the state.
Secondly, traffic jams are becoming a frequent mess in the city roads. Common man has to be encouraged to use public transport so that the number of cars on the roads become less. Additionally, authorities should make sure that connectivity in the towns and cities is well maintained. Trains and buses have to be maintained in good condition both by the government and the public. Privatisation of the maintance of trains and buses shall be a good move.
To sum up, excessive population in urban locations are getting us into multitude of difficulties. Some of them despite their complexities can be tackled by simple action such as avoidance of waste spillage, new laws, proper garbage disposal and use of public transport by the public and government bodies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, likewise, second, secondly, so, well, as to, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43272727273 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02075684239 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650909090909 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5609859791 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0485736719166 0.244688304435 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0156476738647 0.084324248473 19% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0235072890223 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0321368394954 0.151304729494 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228149619269 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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