The best way to reduce youth crime is to educate their parents with parental skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays crime and violance has become very common among young people. Educating parents with parenting skills is the ideal path to prevent crimes comitted by youngsters. I feel that this may be one of the ways to face such issues but this alone cannot solve the scenario's leading to crime as I think crime among younger population is a multi-factorial problem and children also have to be educated besides the society and teachers in the same manner to have a positive impact.
Firstly, no doubt the responsibility of a parent is imperative in the behavioral development of the youth, But it is not wise to solely blame the family members for certain characteristics of a child. Moreover, a young person should get all the opportunities to get him self educated. Educating children by sending them to scholls were they are tought moral values is a better option rather than completely relying on parental skills which might be impossible for some people to obtain due to various reasons such as lack of time, finances and even interest itself. Hence, it will be a total waste if we try to approach this problem in this way.
Secondly, Society plays a vital role in achieving changes in the mind of a adolacent, simply by creating new rules and taking stringant action against crimes, would install fear in the brains of the people. For example, decreasing the punishment age for juvineals shall instil a some fear towards crime. Furthermore, educators at schools and colleges need to constantly remind their pupils about the antisocial activities which shall land them in trouble.
To conclude, I feel that, just by imparting parenting skills in mothers and fathers is not going to have a major impact in the youth who are drifting towards criminal activities. Eventually this can only be tackled by multi-dimentional approach involving the comunity, teachers and parents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, i feel, i think, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03525641026 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83352005128 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641025641026 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.7235296373 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.916666667 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182905688847 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640315573213 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752256648797 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100629457963 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545193105198 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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