Exercise is important for our health, but are there things that are more important? Discuss both views.
Ho Chi Minh said that having good health due to doing regular exercises. We are aware of the importance of doing exercises in our precipitate life. While I agree that exercise is one of the best therapies to make our body wholesome, I believe that other factors such as money will also influence their health.
On the one hand, there is a variety of advantages to doing morning exercises, especially after hard-working hours. It is noteworthy that it prevents or minimizes diseases pervading into our body. This is illustrated by The Time, regular exercises will cement people to reduce depression, enhance memory, concentration and be able to absorb new knowledge. In addition, exercises also slows down the process of brain degeneration. The patients having some serious diseases are encouraged to take morning exercises by doctors or psychologists. For example, scientists do research of 300 people having a stroke, the recovery speed is better than the ones without regular exercises. What's more, it helps human become happier and happier because of hormones that are beneficial to the brain, helping to relieve pain and stress.
On the other hand, money is one of the alternative factors which has a fundamental position in our daily life. Without money, a human would have made end meets or lived in poverty. Therefore, despite doing exercises, you are not only disappointed but also worried about your life in the near future. Plenty of money will be able to use health care services, prolong life if you encounter serious diseases. The poor may die sooner owing to the disability of paying for the hospital bills. The money will control our health and a way to the best items which make it healthier and stronger.
In conclusion, I would concede that exercises or other factors are important to our health. what you act is the most necessary to keep your body well-grown.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01592356688 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73852205075 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579617834395 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.8994714847 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4444444444 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38888888889 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202759400552 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651810393117 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.081155405177 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141766746103 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605941679815 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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