Overpopulation. What problems does overpopulation cause? Suggest at least one possible solution.
over the last half century, the population of the world has increased manifold. Currently there are seven billion people on the planet and this number is projected to grow over the next few decades. this essay will discuss the problems caused by overpopulation such as overexploitation of natural resources and extinction of wild life. this essay will also suggest that sex education is the best possible solution to this problem.
overuse of natural resources is one of the major problems faced by many countries. As the population grows, so does the demand for natural resources. For instance, food, water and fossil fuels are being consumed at record rates, placing greater demands on producers. In addition, overpopulation poses the threat of extinction of wild life. As the demand of land grows, natural habitants such as forests will be destroyed. To illustrate, according to the recent data revealed by scientists, there is a direct link between the increase in population of human beings and the decrease in number of species on the planet. In short, increasing population directly affects us with problems such as overuse of natural resources and destruction of wild life.
However, there are various solutions which can help us to eradicate these problems. overpopulation is mainly contributed by causes such as lack of proper sex education. In developing and poor countries, most of the people do not receive sex education and are unaware of the consequences of overpopulation. In an effort to overcome this issue, awareness campaigns can be conducted in every corner of the country. The government should make sex education a mandatory subject in high schools. For example, in the developing country like India, the government has introduced a complete subject on sex education in the high school syllabus. In other words, better sex education can help us to overcome the problems caused by overpopulation.
To conclude, overpopulation is a crisis that potentially creates problems such as overuse of natural resources and extinction of wild life. Despite this, there is a way to combat such issues by giving proper sex education particularly in schools.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, as for, for example, for instance, in addition, in short, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 27.0 8.3376753507 324% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1829.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27089337176 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01992541389 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504322766571 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 581.4 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4477344176 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.45 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.35 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156710050204 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474016271092 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051634768033 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0887030822549 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229102307505 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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