Financial education should be a mandatory component of the school programme. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this world of expenses, money management has become essential for adults as well as young individual. Lacking of financial knowledge can lead to a mismanagement of money, especially children of this generation are becoming crabby about whatever things they want. Number of human beings argue that financial knowledge should be provided in school which would help a child to understood the value of money.I partly concur to the given statement and would like to discuss some reasons behind this.
To begin with, appropriate use of money is very important life. One has to consider aspects like basic requirements, health, education, recreation and many more while dealing with the finance. They have to spend money according to their budget. Sometime they have to sacrifice their wisher or even basic needs to fulfill other expenses.So many people argue that financial education should be involved in schools which may develop the value of money in children. And as it is believed that a little things implemented in childhood can create a great difference in upcoming future.
But however, today's education has become so vast and complicated that children already have a lot of burden on their mind. Beside long school hours and large amount of homework, parents send their children to tuition classes. Hence so much burden from the school along with the higher expectations of their parents become hectic for a child. And adding to this the brain of a developing child is not that stable to understand such a complex subject of finance.it can be consider as a subject in colleges as students are much capable to understand it at this stage.
As per my point of view, financial education should not be considered as a subject in school rather it can be taught to the children by organizing different activities or by mode of mathematical games which will make it interesting and easy. While school must focus on other subjects like mathematics, science, languages and history which will help to develop child's bright future. And financial knowledge can also be taught at home by their parents as they play significant role in their child's development.
To summarize, in my opinion financial education should be taught by parents and if considered in schools can be taught by some fascinating activities rather than taking into account as a obligatory subject.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1986.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 389.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10539845758 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74231495297 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52442159383 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 612.9 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8164863491 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.125 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3125 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170728744368 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057126058565 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636172218512 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115502610071 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456371048417 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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