TODAY MORE AND MORE TOURISTS ARE VISITING PLACED WHERE CONDITIONS ARE DIFFICULT, SUCH AS SAHARA DESERT OR THE ANTRACTIC.WHAT ARE THE BENEEFITS AND DISADVANTAGES FOR TOURISTS WHO VISIT SUCH PLACES?

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TODAY MORE AND MORE TOURISTS ARE VISITING PLACED WHERE CONDITIONS ARE DIFFICULT, SUCH AS SAHARA DESERT OR THE ANTRACTIC.
WHAT ARE THE BENEEFITS AND DISADVANTAGES FOR TOURISTS WHO VISIT SUCH PLACES?

For a lot of people travelling and visiting new places are their source of happiness. Places that are rarely visited and of challenging conditions are most desired by individuals who are addicted to exploring these types of countries. This assay will go through the pros and cons that those tourists may face during this kind of trips.
Starting with the useful impacts that can affect travellers during those journeys, are that they understand how citizens in those areas live and manage to settle under tough environments. They get to benefit from the cultures of those societies and sometimes acquire new life styles from them. For instance, in the UAE they have to face a very hot, dry climate. Although almost 70% of the country is desert and approximately all year round is hot and dry, they managed to use this in their favor and take tourists on sahara trips and show them how their ancestors used to live in tents. This adds a lot to travellers as they gain knowledge about the culture and experiences new ways of living. Furthermore, usually these kinds of conditions drive citizens to eat certain food and have different daily routines to avoid the hot and dry weather. This definitely affects travellers in one way or another, they ought to benefit from this food and start adding it to their diet.
On the other hand, there are a lot of surprisingly negative effects of such conditions on tourists travelling from different surroundings. They may suffer from health disorders and physical pains due to the change in the weather. A person flying to the South Pole may catch a virus due to the sudden decrease in the temperature making him feel that all his bones are in pain, while the extremely high increase in the temperature of Middle East countries can result in sun burns and severe headaches making a person low in stamina.
In conclusion, travelling has an equal percent of advantages and disadvantaged that one can experience. No doubt it is always considered an add on experience.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 138, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ience. No doubt it is always considered an add on experience.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, no doubt, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85422740525 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67816591207 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568513119534 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.1038556685 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8666666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125423161666 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445425130975 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604398947714 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0817353304534 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764884734588 0.056905535591 134% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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