YOU WORK AT HOME AND HAVE A PROBLEM WITH A PIECE OF EQUIPMENT THAT YOU USE FOR YOUR JOB.
WRITE TO THE SHOP OR COMPAY WICH SUPPLIED THE EQUIPMENT.
DESCRIBE THE PROBLEM WITH THE EQUIPMENT
EXPLAIN HOW THIS PROBLEM IS AFFECTING YOUR WORK
SAY WHAT YOU WANT THE SHOP OR COMPANY TO DO.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Mr. Johns Mayer, I have bought a scanner from your company 6 month ago, with receipt number 558596667. I am writing to you today as I have faced an undesirable issue with your scanner. Yesterday while I was working from home on an important project for my company, I was trying to scan important documents when the scanner’s power button was suddenly off. Although I tried to restart it several times, it was of no use and would not rework.
I am extremely frustrated as I have vital and necessary reports that I need to scan overseas to the head region of my company as soon as possible, it has a huge impact on the future of the company.
I would very much appreciate it if you could send me a new scanner right away so I can proceed my work, I want my old scanner replaced as I am afraid after being fixed this incident might happen again.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours Sincerely,
Mr. Johns Mayer.
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| 2019-04-23 | ayaa khairy | 56 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 67, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
...ve bought a scanner from your company 6 month ago, with receipt number 558596667. I a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, so, while, as to, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 788.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52873563218 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57019307759 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.66091954023 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.615544484 44.8134815571 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 4.34317383033 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163150275358 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776016596926 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548764547584 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0867173992987 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472540170772 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.