During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurant. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants.
Write a letter to this businessman, In your letter:
1. remind him when ans where you met
2. tell him what kind of job you are interested in
3. say why you think you will be suitable for the job
Dear Mr. Sharma,
My name is Vipul, and I hope you remember me. It was 20th April when we both boarded the same flight from Pune to Bangalore and has good job trends in India. During the conversation, you also suggested me to connect with you with respect to any suitable job opportunities at your restaurants.
I want to apprise you that I am interested in a role which oversee the entire operations of a restaurant. A typical manager who would take care of the staffs, the customers, the hospitality, and the infrastructure. This will give me an end to end responsibility and visibility on the role that I will be performing.
I believe I will be a suitable candidate for a position of a restaurant manager as I have done my hotel management from one of the premiere institutes of India. in addition, i have an experience of 3 years in a similar role with AP chains of restaurants. Hence, kindly let me know if there is any suitable vacancy which I can fill in.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Vipul Shrivastava
- During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurant. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants.Write a letter to this businessman, In your letter:1 56
- During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurant. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants.Write a letter to this businessman, In your letter:1 64
- During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurant. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants.Write a letter to this businessman, In your letter:1 64
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 162, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...ne of the premiere institutes of India. in addition, i have an experience of 3 yea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, look, so, in addition, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 871.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6577540107 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02810762457 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1694816794 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1818181818 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168249249697 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612929903439 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598880598695 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102282111479 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549188445769 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.