You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter1) explain why you have moved.2) describe the new house.3) Invite your friend to come and visit.
Dear Sam,
Hope you find this letter in radiant health and the best of spirits. I am writing this letter to let you know that I have changed my residence and now I would be living in city center.
To begin with, I had been looking for change in job since long. Last month I got an offer letter from the organisation with whom I wanted to work. so, without loosing any moment I joined the new company as a Manager in city center. However, as I was living in suburb I used to spend a lot of time travelling so I decided to shift in city center which is close to my workplace. I would like to tell you more about my new apartment.
As you know our city center is congested so it is always difficult to find parking space. But, I have shifted to a neighbourhood on Queen's Road where public parking and central garden are located within reach which are best amenities available for any nearby occupants. Although the apartment is small with one bedroom, hall and kitchen which it is sufficient for me. And you know what it is located on 17 floor so, I can enjoy panaromic view of city. Isn't it great, so I formally invite you over this weekend to see my apartment.
Kindly let me know when you are coming I will come to pick you up from central railway station.
Your friend,
Mark
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 148, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...rganisation with whom I wanted to work. so, without loosing any moment I joined th...
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Line 7, column 216, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'are the best'.
Suggestion: are the best
...l garden are located within reach which are best amenities available for any nearby occu...
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Line 7, column 453, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Isn't
...so, I can enjoy panaromic view of city. Isnt it great, so I formally invite you over...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, you know, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1050.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 243.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.32098765432 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34046058761 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604938271605 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0259837059 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.0 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3571428571 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64285714286 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191796826963 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714381581437 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693029448455 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110559955242 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413348551098 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.48 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.