Most societies have homeless people. Some people think that the best way to help them is to give them money.To what extent do you agree?
In contemporary society, homeless people increase an annual year. People believe that the best solution for this problem which gives them money. However, I agree that people have plenty of the best way to solve this problem.
On the one hand, people believe that giving money to homeless people is a very good solution for society. First of all, governments help them with a public financial charity organization to take money. Homeless people can buy food or a tent if they spend enough money on purchasing these.
On the other hand, I think that giving money to homeless people is not the best way because of some reasons. First of all, if people give them money, this will make them become lazy because they do not need to find a job due to they still have money annual month.
Moreover, when people give them money, this money maybe helps them purchasing a tent or food. However, people cannot give money to everyone who does not have a home or a job. Therefore, this is not the best measure to help homeless people.
In conclusion, giving money for homeless people is not the best way to help them because this way brings some drawbacks for them or society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 68, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to purchase' or 'purchase'.
Suggestion: to purchase; purchase
...them money, this money maybe helps them purchasing a tent or food. However, people cannot ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, i think, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 968.0 1615.20841683 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 207.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67632850242 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25191255994 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 176.041082164 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473429951691 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 299.7 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.5940417303 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.6666666667 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.478487044756 0.244688304435 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.208843387868 0.084324248473 248% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.087005719015 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.322771157122 0.151304729494 213% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578935883266 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.46 8.58950901804 75% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 78.4519038076 33% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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