Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.
It is often said that shopping books, air tickets and groceries on the Internet is becoming much more popular. I totally agree with the idea that the advantages often outweigh the disadvantages.
There are two major dangers of shopping in this way. The most common problem is the delay in delivery. Sometimes it takes a week to have the products delivered to the customers’ doorsteps. As a result, this is frustrated and prevent the customers from buying things online. On top of that, the customers can not feel or touch the goods they want to buy. Lack of touch, feel or try causes concerns over the quality of the products on after. For instance, clothes will not be a suitable thing if you want to shop it online.
On the one hand, there are several outstanding features which helps shopping online become more convenient. To start with, people who are busy can benefit from this type of shopping since it allows them to shop from their homes or their work places without having the customers stood in queues. What is more, to attract buyers to shopping online, some retailers offer special prices to their customers because a shop or a showroom is not necessary for them. Furthermore, Internet gives the company an opportunity to display a whole range of products so as to enable the customers compare the features and prices of the products. Last but not least, our life appears to be easier than before thanks to the Internet. From now on, books, air tickets and groceries are shopped from anywhere on Earth at any time.
In conclusion, due to rapid growth of technology, a new style of shopping turns up and changes our view. From that view, the benefits are believed to much more greater than the drawbacks.
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- Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowle 61
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 550, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ty to display a whole range of products so as to enable the customers compare the featur...
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Line 4, column 147, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...om that view, the benefits are believed to much more greater than the drawbacks. ...
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Line 4, column 155, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'greater' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: greater
...view, the benefits are believed to much more greater than the drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, as to, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, to start with, what is more, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75666666667 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55286113998 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.163996418 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9411764706 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6470588235 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94117647059 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276486239425 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082451703765 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739621226078 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161412846762 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699397921863 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.