Some psychologists say that doing absolutely nothing for a period of time each day is the key to decreasing stress in everyday life.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the majority of psychologists seem that if person nothing to do work or anything which must releaf from stress. However, I do not entirely accept and I will explain why in this essay.
There are a number of arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant is that work and other activities is an essential part of our daily lives, can not only contribute to stay fit and healthy body, but also lead to numerous other benefits in various fields. Thanks to the wode range of advantages it offers in varied areas can not only one benefit more when it comes to being effective, but they can also enhances the productivity and quality of their lives, with much ease efficacy and convenience. Needless to say that all these merits stand one in good stead, as far as augmenting their chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of the aforementioned proposition is that it is only likely to help one thrive and excel in varied areas. Besides, only when one follows such a system, can they broaden their horizons, thus learning such essential attributes as responsibility, dedication and perseverance. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favour of due to doing thing reduce stress much more instead of nothing to do anything.
In view of the argument outlined above, one can conclude that the benefits of work which keep mind divert from irrelevant thing are indeed too great to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1246.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82945736434 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72360124206 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600775193798 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.0403488361 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.6 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0924436619615 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0399298739522 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598233595299 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0617922289498 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599447968735 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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