PLASTIC WASTE IN INDUSTRIES SHOULD BE CONTROLLED OR NOT?
Now a days many people have a knowledge about plastic pollutes the environment. some people believe companies do not allow to use plastic containers for their products. I agree about what people says in recent time plastic thrown on land that enter into the drainage and choke them resulting into floods in local areas in cities as experienced.
Plastics are used because they are easy and cheap to make and they can use for long time. Unfortunately, these same useful qualities can make plastic a huge pollution problem. The cheap means plastic gets discarded easily and its long life means it survey in the environment for long periods where it can do great harm. Recently a cow was found full of plastic in his stomach and it contain 35 kg of plastic. Because plastic is not decomposable, and it requires high energy light to break down, the amount of plastic wastage on the ocean is normally increasing.
More than 90% of the articles found on the sea beaches contained plastic. And it affects beach’s many people and children were visits and play games they may also affect. Sea animals are mostly affected by the plastic pollution. Sea animals like turtles, jellyfish etc.
To conclude, the government should take necessary actions towards the industries and company which causes or produces plastic waste and also it has to be controlled. which can be done through awareness and campaigns to educate the people as well as producers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, well, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1206.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 244.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94262295082 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5862311916 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635245901639 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3246560243 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1428571429 104.977214359 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4285714286 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.25397266985 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.33497536946 187% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254482252428 0.242375264174 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831288826816 0.0925447433944 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0821569737527 0.071462118173 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147747078565 0.151781067708 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0951508421498 0.0609392437508 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 12.6369458128 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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