Tourism is an ever growing industry.
What benefits do you think tourism brings to individuals and society.
Nowadays commute between one nation to another county become less easy compare to past, and it helps to emerge tourism industry more rapidly. Considering this fact, individuals and society benefited in several ways in terms of socially and economically.
With increasing tourism in any country, more employment getting generated in different fields. people who knows history of their native place, can use that knowledge by being a tour guide and convey to person visited as tourist and often interested in ancient story of the site they are traveling. Furthermore, travellers book private vehicle to roam around and its beneficial to local cab drivers to earn some bread and butter. Also, some tourist interested to collect souvenir of the place they visited and shop keepers selling those make money out from it. In some countries, tourism is the main source of income and with growing number of tourist, individuals' get more work and it will reduce unemployment of the nation.
From the social aspect, tourism gave opportunity to people to learn about different cultures and traditions. Since visitors belongs to other part of the world, exchange their thoughts with localize and building healthy relationship. often this culture exchange helps nations to generate strong bond with neighboring nations.
To sum up, growth in tourism always have pros for the nations who majorly dependent on it and its directly benefited to the people living at that place and culture of the place.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, as to, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1255.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2510460251 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5989697288 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65690376569 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3414590647 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.090909091 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7272727273 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12717938701 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048754241289 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476179206216 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0786677039509 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240015636526 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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