It is suggested that everyone wants to have a car, a television and a fridge. Do the disadvantages of this development for society outweigh the advantages?
Everyone wants to make their lives easier. Thanks to today's advanced technology it is possible. Many people are in need of a car, a television or a fridge. In my opinion, it is not true that the disadvantages of this development for society outweigh the advantages.
Firstly, thanks to the invention of a car one is able to travel everywhere easily. In the past working in another city was not that easy because the distance which one had to travel was taking a lot of time. nowadays a lot of people travel to different cities by car. It is really a fast and convenient way of transportation.
Secondly, fridges are a must have in every household. Due to this invention food can stay fresh longer and it is less likely that one can get food poisoning because of rotten meat or vegetable. Moreover, nowadays fridges are not just only for storing food. Some of them can pour drinking water into one's glass and add ice cubes too. There are even fridges which can make one's shopping lists. Notwithstanding, there is one disadvantage to this invention. Overconsumption is a huge problem. this behavior can lead to different kinds of diseases.
Television, in my opinion, is not needed. Nowadays, if one wants to watch a movie, series or hear some news, one can find everything on the internet. One can find different kinds of news there, compare them and decide which one is true. The disadvantage of television is that one has to watch things that are played right now. What is more, most of the news are subjected.
In my opinion, in most cases the advantages of car and fridge outweigh disadvantages. The only that is unnecessary and has no advantages is television.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Nowadays
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Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, as to, in most cases, in my opinion, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73630136986 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86490360052 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527397260274 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.9330192075 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.1304347826 106.682146367 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.6956521739 20.7667163134 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73913043478 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214106718558 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614038197339 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793497729419 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140874112297 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129793617164 0.056905535591 228% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 13.0946893788 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.32 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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