Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In our modern world, many people think that disappearance of flora and fauna has been an alarming issue, while the others believe we are coping with other environmental disasters that are more serious. From my perspective, If I have to choose a nature problem to deal with at present, there is nothing except climate change and global warming, which are in my utmost consideration.
On the one hand, the development of trees and wild or domesticated animals are in danger. It is needless to say that the number of animals and plants have significantly decreased compared to those in a decade ago. The more our population is all over the world, the fewer green trees and animals are. As a result, our scientists are researching many experiments to help these objects feasibly adapt to environment. In addition to this, the price of foods has a tendency to be higher than ever and the main reason is the loss of popular flora and fauna in the wide regions. Foods plays a crucial role; therefore, the lack of it has a huge impact on our existence.
On the other hand, I agree with those who argue that we should consider other environmental problems, such as climate change and global warming on the higher priorities. The temperature on earth is at alarming levels and people is facing with the hottest weather than before. This can lead to not only the death of plants or animals but also human beings’ health are in a dangerous situation. We can observe hundreds of victims who suffer skin cancers and other health fatigue cases related to climate change on TV programmes everyday. Moreover, in recent years, there are more and more accidental storms and catastrophes that can damage the survival of humans and our eco-habitat. We should not underestimate these vital problems and need immediate solutions to address this.
In conclusion, even though both these points of views have their own reasons, I personally agree that we need to give short-term and long-term resolutions for more important environmental matters, including climate change and global warming.
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 95
- Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problemsDiscuss both these views and give your own opinion. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 531, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1730.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97126436782 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80129822875 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560344827586 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2731922901 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.333333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237306033497 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651434548809 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481991810089 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136007269515 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023007310236 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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