Foreign tourist abroad should be charged more than local people to visit a country’s cultural and historical attractions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Write at least 250 words
There is an ongoing discussion on the topic of whether non-native visitors ought to be charged more compare to the native people in terms of fees to visit a country's cultural and historical places. If question asked to me, at large extent, I conceive a notion that the foreigners should be treated equally. The reasons for my perception are elucidated in the ensuing paragraphs.
The first reason I shall put forth is that a universal fee structure is beneficial for a nation's tourist industry. This is because by different charges to the attractions can make tourists discriminated. eventually, this will create a bad impression of a country and therefore, the exacerbate effect will be suffered by the tourism industry. Needless to say, many people elk out their living from tourist industry. they all will suffer and eventually this can hinder the country's financial stability.
Additionally, knowledge should be easily accessible. In other words, sometime people forget that third world nations also visit different countries to explore their culture, rituals and heritage sites. If they will be also imposed to hefty foreigner fees then the knowledge will be limited to the wealthy people. Furthermore, knowledge will become a luxury that everyone will not be able to afford.
In my opinion, however, sometimes foreigners do not respect the host counties heritage sites and cultural values. they create litters and in some cases, damages the properties. For instance, a decade ago Tajmahal- one of the renowned place in india was full of trash and people visiting this famous place used to write names on the wall of it. The aesthetic appearance was utmost damaged. To rectify this issue, government of india started collecting heavy fees from tourists and used the extra money for security and maintenance. Eventually, the Tajmahal became a great and beautiful place to visit again.
In the end, I pen down by saying that, foreigners should be treated equally. The rules and regulations should be same for every person. Though there are some cases where different admission fees can be justified, in most cases equality is essential to boost tourism in the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, so, then, therefore, third, for instance, in most cases, in my opinion, in other words, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1837.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20396600567 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75069800414 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57507082153 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0049316688 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4761904762 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8095238095 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224750694601 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602009158117 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474184285538 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12380369303 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539993987927 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.