Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines.
Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages?
Nowadays, the housework which used to be done manually are being done through machines. This essay will explain why I believe the merits of working with machines outweigh its drawbacks when compared to manual process of work.
Considering firstly the benefits of using machines at home are that they are often more time saving and very effective in its use. With regards to the former, machines are typically time-savers as they are automated, which is especially useful for families with children as they get time to bond with them. As for the latter, at least in case of washing machines, vacuum cleaners, and dish washers, they usually do a high quality job at a faster rate. Conversely, not only manual works are generally time consuming, but they are also less-effective in terms of quality and speed.
However, the main drawback of using machines are that they reduce the physical activity a human body is involved while doing household works. The vast majority of individuals are regularly involved in some kind of exercise because of the manual work they need to do at home. As a result of lack of this, the number of people suffering from joint pains and obesity disorder are substantially higher. Contrast this with the previous generation individuals who frequently involved themselves in manual process of washing clothes, utensils, and cleaning/mopping the house were fitter and healthier.
In conclusion, I think that the advantages of saving time and effective use in utilizing machines in day-to-day activities outweigh the disadvantages of lack of physical activity in comparison to manual chores.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, firstly, however, so, while, as for, at least, i think, in conclusion, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20610687023 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83644030875 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583969465649 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.396689102 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8181818182 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181788874827 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757844004859 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10256747369 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115898844866 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737061441273 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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