Recently, it is common for people not to know their neighbors. What is the cause of this problem? What can be done to solve this problem?
These days, commonly people less contact with neighborhood and not know it impotent. Becoming this problem behind have many reason such as people disconnect real relationship with society and move to fake relation on the social media, another is that people spend more time on job place as they would earn more money, so these reason people can't interact with each other. I will discuss these causes detail and possible solution.
Present time, people move on social media and making more new friends as well as they lost real life friends and increase distance with neighborhood. They more times spend on social media and chat with them, share their problems. They more trust on social media friends than neighborhood, so they less talk with neighbor. Another reason is that people more and more time spend on job place because they do overtime for earning more money sometime their work late complete many other reason. So, people can't spend time with neighborhood and can't introduce with.
We seen problem above why people less contact with their neighbors. These problem solutions are that people more time spend with neighbors. That means people must less use social media and interne, and some time spend next to leave neighbors. They must share good or bad moment. Second should do that people some weak end and holy day avoid planning go outside city with and spend with neighborhood, and doing some activity such as play game, talking and waking with each other, dinner, etc. Spend times society should organize get to ather activity so people can know who live in society and introduce to each other.
In stark conclusion, in society, people less known neighbors this problems two main reason are that vast use of social media and long time spend on job. These problems solution are that people should more time spend with neighbors and doing some activity with.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'many reasons'.
Suggestion: many reasons
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...earn more money, so these reason people cant interact with each other. I will discus...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... complete many other reason. So, people cant spend time with neighborhood and cant i...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...e cant spend time with neighborhood and cant introduce with. We seen problem abov...
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Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'saw'?
Suggestion: saw
...hborhood and cant introduce with. We seen problem above why people less contact w...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'problems'' or 'problem's'?
Suggestion: problems'; problem's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9746031746 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15637126021 2.80592935109 77% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488888888889 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.877733539 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9375 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6875 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5625 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149269930108 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700254153937 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055382203993 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119021634951 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429079811132 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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