Some people believe that a government's responsibility should provide care and financial support for people after they retire other say individuals should save during their working year to fund their own retirement. Do you agree or disagree, and what is your opinion?
Today most countries involve with serious economic problems so that they could not afford most of running costs of their society. One of these costs is nothing but care and financial support of senior citizens. According to some people, this is the government which is responsible for providing these items for retired people. While some other person believe that own person should gather money in their working year, and spend that whenever it needs. I go wholeheartedly along with the former viewpoint, however both aspect will be discussed briefly.
On the one hand, one of the duties that government should consider is providing care and financial support for people who retire. This is because when people get old, their problems and difficulties remarkably increase. Not only would their expenditures climb, but also their disposable income declines. It is owing to missing remuneration, bounce and perquisite, and substituting these sources of income by a pittance, pension, to get by. For instance, one of the most important cost which should be affordable is in the field of cure and medical treatment. Additionally, the circle of their family gradually become larger and they need more money to spend for their immediate family. Then, under no circumstance could government not help eschewing from care and financial support for senior citizen people.
On the other hand, some people insist that people could pay the costs of retirement years by themselves without any funding from government. They have never ever addressed the problems, disasters even, that elder and retired people deal with in their life. They always try to excuse government from blatant duties and expect from people to glean money to spend in their own retirement.
To recapitulate briefly, although there are some people thinking care and financial aid to retirement is one of duties of government, there are some not believing in this way, and opining own person should scrape up money for consuming during retirement. Therefore, while funding to retirement, government should support them more than other adult population.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 320, Rule ID: IT_IS_JJ_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lose'?
Suggestion: lose
...posable income declines. It is owing to losing remuneration, bounce and perquisite, an...
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Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to eschew' or 'eschew'.
Suggestion: to eschew; eschew
... circumstance could government not help eschewing from care and financial support for sen...
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Line 7, column 256, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
... money for consuming during retirement. therefore, while funding to retirement, governmen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, however, if, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1782.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30357142857 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67477906138 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532738095238 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0800126165 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.823529412 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7647058824 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41176470588 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.445544479134 0.244688304435 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133522617178 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759883651015 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.282856049089 0.151304729494 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284172208982 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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