Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarket in some countries, many small, local businesses are unable to compete. some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
There are different views of local societies about escalation of supermarkets in different countries. The number of large unit of super market is typically dominated on local communities over the last decades. While I agree that government should eye on this typical situation and cater the local communities.
Firstly, Supermarket is the most beneficial place for buying different products under the one roof. Furthermore, many industries, business men and shopkeeper also purchases product on bulk quantity of their businesses. For a verity of reasons, several families that do not want to buy products from local shops on account of inadequacy of variety, and some people think supermarket product rates are cheaper as compare to local shop. While a small number of people gets attractive on different scheme of supermarkets.
In contrast, the reverse situation was found that a large community of local business men experience decreased while supermarket increased rapidly. On account of this, many stores and shops have been closed that enlarge the unemployment ratio too. Notwithstanding, a majority of people are still surviving hardly to expand their businesses, because, it is very essential for the government to forming the criteria of business and entice to the local community that eventually would help to country’s development.
To summarize, supermarket is the best place for easy buying in your comfort with different verity of products, meanwhile government should encourage to local businesses too.
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Suggestion: a few; some
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ould encourage to local businesses too.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, still, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1301.0 965.302439024 135% => OK
No of words: 233.0 196.424390244 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58369098712 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05607126099 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592274678112 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 283.868780488 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0467632377 43.030603864 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.272727273 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1818181818 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18181818182 5.23603664747 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280741776455 0.215688989381 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100934161511 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559078009192 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166376197187 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029135176843 0.0819641961636 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 61.2550243902 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 11.4140731707 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 40.7170731707 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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