in many countries, smoking is now illegal in public places, do you agree or disagree?
In Some Nations, the use of cigarettes in public zone is prohibited by the government. I fully agree with this policy it is intolerance and the smoke pollute the environment.
Smoking in the public zone is intolerance, the smoke that made from the smoker can disturb another person which are near them and not smoking. The smoke from their cigar can make the smoke’s inhaler have some breathing problems, such as coughing. In addition, smoking has also a dangerous consequence for someone who has a fatal breathing problem, such as Asthma.
Furthermore, there was research held by the University of Indonesia for observing the effect of the smoker’s smoke to passive smokers. As a result, the passive smokers have a higher risk than the smokers with a comparison by 70:30, so it is more dangerous for the passive to breathing the air which is released from the smokers.
In addition, smoker’s fog also has a dangerous impact which is dangerous for our environment. The fog that released from the smoker’s mouth and from the cigar is dangerous, which contain a lot of harmful particles which will damage the ecosystem.
For example, a person always smokes, and throw the cigar, not in the trash will undermine the soil which will make the soil unfertile for growing plant. Beside of harming the environment, it will also disserve everyone who grows their plant in the soil which polluted by the cigar’s waste.
In conclusion, using cigarettes in public zone have a lot of disadvantages for the citizens and also for the environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03861003861 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90916840934 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482625482625 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3653677 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.75 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0813839083138 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416742991777 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427704738478 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0520533064076 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533519466637 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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