Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an
unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try
and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, people are straightforward to undertake bad situations such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. That leads to debate whether we should accept such a bad situation or try and improve such bad situations. In my opinion, it is superior to try to overcome bad situations.
On the one hand, bad situations are eminent opportunities to figure out who are true friends and truly care about us. For example, when a person is a shortage of money, people that lend him money or try to give assistance to improve his bad situation indicate that they willing to help not because of only benefits. Furthermore, after suffering from terrible curriculums, people tend to appreciate things happening in ordinary situations, such as a good apartment, a typical meal, an aggressive boss. These things that people do not aware of its importance and advantages until they undergo the worst situations.
On the other hand, manifestly we can not live in the darkness forever, it is essential to find ways to improve bad situations. Because the most important aspect that bad situations bring to us is the chance to learn new skills and improve strengths in processes of tacking problems. For instance, an unsatisfactory job would forge employees better handling skills for working under pressure and stress. Besides that, people could take advantages of solutions for tough situations as lesson learns to prevent repeating in the future. In order to do that, people need to try and figure out ways to solve problems and improve unfortunate cases. Otherwise, they will live in poor conditions and have low qualities of life in the long run.
In conclusion, bad situations are unavoidable in life and accepting them is one of the necessary sights of life. However, this acceptation is only beneficial in a short time, the more time was accounted for bad situations the lower life people have. That is the reason that tries to overcome and improve those such situations are the most crucial and should be seriously considered.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
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Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, however, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1692.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03571428571 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89599085609 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544642857143 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3817223874 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.75 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262590274688 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091217491861 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699163109503 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179685733449 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0877047763138 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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